negative response

Fail Project

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I wanted to take a minute and comment on this particular project. As it seems to be the source of my  great undoing.  I didn't have a direction on this aesthetically to begin with, but when asked if the picture was at all offensive - I got no response. Just text edits. So it wound up being redone and redone and redone again.  If I look at the first one, I had the elements - the box at the bottom, the newsletters. It was just needing something to play up the text versus an "inspiring picture".  I agree with the changes, and it looks much better on the second variation - but some input from the start would have been very helpful.